Re: Advocay page - Mailing list pgadmin-hackers

From Dave Page
Subject Re: Advocay page
Date
Msg-id 03AF4E498C591348A42FC93DEA9661B872055A@mail.vale-housing.co.uk
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In response to Advocay page  (Jean-Michel POURE <jm@poure.com>)
List pgadmin-hackers

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jean-Michel POURE [mailto:jm@poure.com]
> Sent: 21 January 2004 10:32
> To: pgadmin-hackers@postgresql.org
> Subject: [pgadmin-hackers] Advocay page
>
> Dear all,
>
> Any feedback is welcome about the advocacy page:
> http://www.pgadmin.org/pgadmin3/advocacy.php

Cool, looks good. Coupla points:

- 'In the long run' not 'On the long run'
- 'PostgreSQL and pgAdmin free software are...' isn't something you
would write (or say). Try something like 'The free software packages
PostgreSQL and pgAdmin are...'
- The indenting of the list of entries at the bottom is all messed up.

Cheers, Dave.

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