From 1b798d07c6a44855cb3e6e67809f41acd9282ab2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Karl O. Pinc" <kop@karlpinc.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Sep 2023 15:32:23 -0500
Subject: [PATCH v6 05/15] Improve sentences in overview of system
 configuration parameters

Get rid of "we" wording.  Remove extra words in sentences.

Line break after end of each sentence to ease future patch reading.
---
 doc/src/sgml/config.sgml | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 6bc1b215db..97f9838bfb 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -10,9 +10,10 @@
 
   <para>
    There are many configuration parameters that affect the behavior of
-   the database system. In the first section of this chapter we
-   describe how to interact with configuration parameters. The subsequent sections
-   discuss each parameter in detail.
+   the database system.
+   The first section of this chapter describes how to interact with
+   configuration parameters.
+   Subsequent sections discuss each parameter in detail.
   </para>
 
   <sect1 id="config-setting">
-- 
2.30.2